Ok first time writing one of these, but cause you're a cool guys here we go.

this photo is done really well the colour exposure lighting and whites and blacks are all on point the cars is so clean looks like it just came off the line, so bravo on those factors,
now the downfall imo to this image is just the model its like she wasn't feeling the image just the facial reaction doesn't seem to fit the mood of the phot if you know what im saying.

all and all you did a great job keep it up.